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SBI PO Essay Writing Sample - Unemployment In India

Today, Unemployment is the main problem in India and people is upset with his life. Well educated people have lots of problem to find job according to their qualification but uneducated people can find job because they have habit from earlier to work in summer or winter in rain or sunshine.

Many graduate are waiting to job in India although many are about to complete graduation. There is job in India but competition is very high when 200 posts come in any government sector job then 2 lacks to five lacks candidates fill the form for getting that job. We can easily realize about the problem of unemployment to see candidates' number in any competition exam. There are many reason for unemployment problem in India :-

Population

Population , that is uncontrolled way is responsible for unemployment in India. I have to say that government should make the policy to decrease population although it will be very tough to provide to job to everyone.

Lack of good policy

Government should make good policy for those who have no job. MANERGA is very good program for rural areas people but it is not fit for educated people because they are not able to work what MANERGA provide to unemployment people in rural areas. I think government must open program for educated people according to their qualification. 

Lack of right education

I think education system needs to improve and start that syllabus which may helpful to create business to students. 

Lack of business loans

I think if government provides loan to an unemployment candidate then they can create business and be stand on their feet. 

Today, people are going to mad and arise any steps to earn money. They are going to be a criminal or terrorist. Everyone wants to live happy life and effected by globalization age. I think our economic expert should come to forward and try to stop this problem otherwise human rights will be end from the world.

Dhiraj (Bihar)

My comments

  • Poor grammar
  • Unable to support the opinions with facts
  • Lots of spelling errors
  • No alignment. Sometimes you are using third person and sometime first person.
  • "Unlack" is not a word in English dictionary.
  • Try to improve your writing skills.
  • Score 2.5/10
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