SBI PO Essay Writing Sample - Unemployment In India

Today, Unemployment is the main problem in India and people is upset with his life. Well educated people have lots of problem to find job according to their qualification but uneducated people can find job because they have habit from earlier to work in summer or winter in rain or sunshine.

Many graduate are waiting to job in India although many are about to complete graduation. There is job in India but competition is very high when 200 posts come in any government sector job then 2 lacks to five lacks candidates fill the form for getting that job. We can easily realize about the problem of unemployment to see candidates' number in any competition exam. There are many reason for unemployment problem in India :-

Population

Population , that is uncontrolled way is responsible for unemployment in India. I have to say that government should make the policy to decrease population although it will be very tough to provide to job to everyone.

Lack of good policy

Government should make good policy for those who have no job. MANERGA is very good program for rural areas people but it is not fit for educated people because they are not able to work what MANERGA provide to unemployment people in rural areas. I think government must open program for educated people according to their qualification. 

Lack of right education

I think education system needs to improve and start that syllabus which may helpful to create business to students. 

Lack of business loans

I think if government provides loan to an unemployment candidate then they can create business and be stand on their feet. 

Today, people are going to mad and arise any steps to earn money. They are going to be a criminal or terrorist. Everyone wants to live happy life and effected by globalization age. I think our economic expert should come to forward and try to stop this problem otherwise human rights will be end from the world.

Dhiraj (Bihar)

My comments

  • Poor grammar
  • Unable to support the opinions with facts
  • Lots of spelling errors
  • No alignment. Sometimes you are using third person and sometime first person.
  • "Unlack" is not a word in English dictionary.
  • Try to improve your writing skills.
  • Score 2.5/10
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22 comments:

  1. Please explain me is only white back ground photo only used for sbi application . Please please give me reply

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    1. Yes Because Photo looks clear uniformally in white background...

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  2. nice try....keep it up....

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  3. grammer aur english ki li li bhai tune.. 1/10

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  4. sir, according to you which type of essay is good? please write at least one essay for us.....thanks sir././.

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  5. or give us a link where we read full and excellent essays for sbi po././.

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  6. Please provide a list of essay titles so tht we can start to prepare for sbi po 2014
    And thnk u very much for guidelines

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  7. thanks for sharing an essay sir also give ur marks out which we will get if we write this or some other kind of essay so that we can get to know abt it and analyse

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  8. is there any bond agreement for sbi po. plz do reply

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  9. such a bad grammar and lack of clarity of thoughts cannot fetch any good marks in the descriptive section. also it reflects the way of thinking of the candidate, which in this case, I don't find very Officer like!

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  10. the author has a very narrow thinking

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  11. Please Raman, don't post this type of articles...RIP English :)

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  12. soon general category will be extinct like dinasours in government jobs. as per current scenario 30-40% of ur seats are taken by sc st obc.it means sc st obc representation=50+15-20%

    it means only 1 out of 3 person getting govt job is from general category.

    in coming future with increased level of awareness sc st obc will surely get 50-60% of ur seats.means their representation will increase to 75-80%.


    thus we can say future is babaji ka thullu for general category.


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    1. Yes offcourse.!! Now it is needless to say that if this trend is going to be continued for long,then people from general category will be left with no chances of exactly what they deserve. It is now less of competition and more of quota thing which is spreading in almost every competitive exams.!

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  13. Seriously job shld be given to deserving candidates and not on the basis of reservation or category.deserving candidates sit jobless and based on reservations least deserving candidates get job

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  14. ARREY BHAI IF SC/ST/OBC ARE SCORING AT PAR WITH GENERAL CATEGORY CANDIDATES. THEN THEY CAN GET JOBS IN GENERAL CATEGORY.WHERE IS THE PROBLEM IN THAT? THEY ARE ADJUSTED ONLY AGAINST RESRVED SEATS IN THEIR RESPECTIVE ORGANISATION. WHEN THEY FILL RESERVED CATEGORY IN APPLICATION FORM , THEN CAN'T GET JOB IN GENERAL CATEGORY.

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  15. a general candidate who gets higher marks than a reserved category candidate doesn't get a job...why??? coz he/she is gen and is born wealthy..i am not against a reserved category candidate getting a seat in gen category (coz talent deserves recognition),but a gen candidate cannot get a job in reserved catagory even if seats are left vacant...think about that from a gen candidate's viewpoint, he/she can compete for only 50- 55 seats and a reserved cat cand can compete for 100 seats if we assume the total no of seats as 100..... it's a curse o be a gen cand...

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  16. raman u have to elobrate more

    i.e before providing the job governement should bring some resolutions
    facts regarding education system ..., and role RTI on right to education and diciplinary system regarding job system in india

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